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PostSubject: What-if...the following trained for   What-if...the following trained for Icon_minitimeFri Apr 04, 2014 12:02 am

WWhat if Roshi, Tao, Tsuru-Sennin (Crane Hermit), Korin, and the other Dragon Ball fighters trained for the Saiyans!?. What if Raditz turned good!?.

Alot is going to be different, and he story will radically change. Piccolo will be relevant to the end, The Humans will do farrr more and so will Dabura and other characters I feel should have got more attention...

Evenmts will be changed radically as said above, and many things applied in the regular series will be changed (as it is my story and an alternative universe)...

This is not the full story, just a rough outline...

Okay lets begin...

Saiyan Saga Part 1

Not much of a change here... everything goes as the regular timeline...

Raditz 1250

Goku 334
~Weights Removed 416

Piccolo Daimao 322
~Weights Removed 406
~Special Beam Canon 1330

Gohan 1
~Enraged 701
~More Rage 1500

Tenshinhan 250
Krillin 206
Yamcha 175
Roshi 139

Saiyan Saga Part 2

So, the Saiyans are coming to earth (Same as regular story...) and Piccolo trains Gohan...

Roshi decides to go with our heroes to the look-out to train, believing he can be of use against the Saiyans...

In the otherworld, Goku begs that Yemma gives Raditz a second chance. (Raditz arrives to the check in station as Goku arrives). Goku explains to Yemma that Raditz never had the chance to be good, and sending him to hell would not be a fair punishment. Goku says he believes that Raditz deserves a chance at being good, and if he had been born under Raditz'es circumstances the events and occurances would be the same.

Yemma, since Goku has a good track record agrees.

On the look out, The Humans are getting even more stronger since Roshi is training with them (an extra training parnter). Kami decides to train to and unlike the regular series the Humans are training MUCH more hardcore...

Even Yajirobe is fully training...

Piccolo leaves Gohan in the wilderness and decides of a plan to toughen Gohan up. He recreates and spits out Tambourine, and orders Tambourine to follow and attack Gohan. Than he spits out and recreates three more minions...one is Drum in order to spar with, the other is Cymbal who he will use to scout out powerful fighters across the earth and the other is Piano (who will give him advice)...

Piccolo than heads to the newstation and states that he is Daimao, and that he might be evil but in a year a new enemy will be arriving..The Saiyans and the Saiyans will be far far above him and his current power... Piccolo announces that the best martial artists in Earth should assemble to help fight the Saiyans and that although currently the best of Earth have assembled more are needed...

King Chappa, Giran, and Nam assemble and travel to Korins tower... They all agree to train with Korin to fight the Saiyans..

Meanwhile, Goku and Raditz have arrived on King Kais Planet...Raditz has become a Anti-hero now and has joined his brothers cause... Raditz is better than Goku in base, however Goku is starting to learn the Kaioken... Raditz has evoloved past his previous tail weakness....

Uranai Baba, apon hearing the news has instructed Devil and Mummy-man to train for the Saiyans... both of them are fighting various opponents in the underworld...

Current Levels.....

Raditz (On King Kais Planet for a bit) 2700
Goku (On King Kais Planet for a bit) 2400
Piccolo Daimao (Trained some) 700
Drum 400
Tenshinhan (trained some) 375
Gohan (first few days of training and being hunted by Tambourine) 100
Tambourine 300
Krillin (Trained Some) 285
Roshi (Trained Some) 190
Yamcha (Trained Some) 225
Cymbal 110
Giran 95
Nam 60
King Chappa 100
Korin 230 (has gained power a bit do to some training with Nam/Chappa/Giran)
Devil 89
Mummy 70
Chaozu 180
Cymbal 100

After a few more weeks of running from Tambourine, Gohan encounters a old man and his brother. The Old Man states he used to be a top tier martial artist, and was once world renowned until a brat interfereed and caused his best disciple to abandone him. The other man, a cyborg states he was killed by the same brat and the top student of his brother defeated him embarrising him...

Gohan begs both to train him in martial arts, so they agree to do so after Gohan tells them of the Saiyans arrival...

After a month of hardcore training with Tsuru Sennin and Tao Pai, Gohan now knows several of the crane school techniques. He knows 4 arms growth (forget the name of the attack), Dodon Ray,and several other attacks.

Tambourine attacks Gohan, and Tsuru fights Tambourine. After a heated battle Tsuru is defeated. Tambourine begins laughing at Gohan and calling him a weakling and than Gohan snaps and beats the hell out of Tambourine. Before Gohan can finish him, Piccolo steps in and states that Tambourine is working for him and that Gohans challenge was to defeat Tambourine to prove his strength, and since he has surpassed Tambourine he will train with Piccolo. At first Tsuru is shocked to see Daimao and attacks Piccolo but is defeated. Hopwever, Tsuru and Tao both agree to train with Piccolo for the Saiyans arrival...

After 3 more months of training (note that 3months have already past, took Gohan 2 months to defeat Tambourine, a few days for Goku to run through Snakeway since he had Raditz helping him) our heroes current power levels look like..

Kaio Samas Planet

Goku (KKX2) 12,000
Raditz 6000
Goku 5000
King Kai 3500

Goku and Raditz are much stronger do to training with eachother...

Daimaos training

Piccolo Daimao 2600
Drum 2000
Gohan 1850
Cyborg Tao Pai Pai 1500
Tsuru-Sennin 1350
Cymbal 1000

Gohan is much stronger do to training with more people, and learning the crane school techniques... Same with Daimao Jr...

Kamis Lookout

Tenshinhan 1750
Krillin 1280
Yamcha 1100
Chaozu 700
Yajirobe 760
Roshi 1000
~Buff 1400
Mister Popo 1300 (gotten much stronger do to training with the maggots hardcore)
Kami 1500 (same as Popo)

Korin Tower

Korin 950
Giran 230
Chappa 300
Nam 275

Korin has utlizied his training and is gaining power faster than the others...each day they run up and down Korin tower over and over....

Saiyans

Nappa (Initial) 3500
Nappa (Suppressed) 4000
Nappa (Full Power) 7900
Vegeta (Relaxed) 12,000
Vegeta (Full Power) 18,000

Saiyans are same as in the series....

Arrival of the Saiyans

The Saiyans arrive... Goku/Raditz are running back on Snakeway to earth....the power levels are

Nappa (Initial) 3500
Vegeta (Relaxed) 12,000
Goku (Suppressed) 6500
Raditz (Suppressed) 6000
Piccolo Daimao 5000
Gohan 4000
Drum 3750
Cyborg Tao 3200
Tsuru-Sennin 3000
Tenshinhan 3350
Tambourine 2900
Krillin 2800
Yamcha 2450
Cymbal 1800
Roshi 2000
~Buff 2500
Yajirobe 1750
Chaiaotzu 1500
Mister Popo 1800
Kami 1900
Korin 1900
Nam 500
Giran 550
Chappa 650
Devilman 180
Mummy 150

Nappa is shocked after scouting the power levels of the strongest of the New Z-Senshi...especially the power levels of the strongest Piccolo (5000), Gohan (4000), Drum (3500), (Tenshinhan (3350), and Tao (3200).

Tenshinhan and Chiaotzu are shocked to see Tsuru and Tao, but Gohan says they have turned good...

Vegeta instructs Nappa to plant the Saibamen, and six rise from the ground.

Chappa steps up to fight the first Saibamen and startts laughing at it and calling it a weakling.

Chappa than hits the Saibamen with his eight armed technique and begins punching the Saibamen over and over. The Saibamen falls down and Chappa begins laughing at it. Chappa continues to taunt Vegeta and Nappa, "is that all you Saiyans got!, I am King Chappa I do not have time for weaklings like you!".

The Saibamen than gets back up and starts smiling 100% uneffected by Chappas brutal attack. Chappa stands back in shock and before he can react, The Saibamen elbows him in the chest punching a whole through his heart.

Giran and Nam become enraged at their friends death and charge into the battle, Giran blasts the Saibamen with a mouth beam sending it into the air than Nam chops it down. Mummy uses his bandages to grab the Saibamen and than (along with Devil) the four start beating the Saibamen to a pulp. The Saibamen is only slightly damaged, and quickly breaks out of the bandages than charges Mummy. Before Mummy can react, the Saibamen slashes him in half.

Giran than charges the Saibamen and hits it with his tail as hard as he can, The Saibamen barley moves than punches Giran straight through the chest. Giran screams in pain, and falls down dying and Nam rushes the Saibamen throwing a large variety of angry attacks. The Saibamen dodges each one than kicks Nam in the head shattering his jaw and killing him.

Devil (who by some miracle managed to survive the Saibamens attack) flys into the air and fires his beam of evil at the Saibamen. Devils ribs are broken and he is badly injured. The beam destroys the Saibamen and Devil begins laughing.

"HAHAH, you pathetic Saiyans are no match for my Devilmite beam!" the Demon screamed laughing. Devil aimed the beam at the Saiyans, and before he could fire it Vegeta destroyed him with a simple energy blast.

"fool! if you've got an attack like that, don't yell it out to the world!" laughs Vegeta

Piccolo commands the rest of the Z Fighters not to attack yet, and they reluctantly agree. Enraged, Giran fires his merry go ground gum at Vegeta. Giran begans laughing than charges his best attack and yells "DESTRUCTIVE BEAM!" firing a giant purple blast at Vegeta and Nappa. The Saibamen all manage to avoid the blast and Vegeta and Nappa stand unaffected by it. Vegeta than breaks out of the gum, laughing than kills Giran with a beam to the head.

The Z-Senshi quickly attack, and quickly kill the Saibamen. Krillin blows up one with a ki blast, Tenshinhan shatters ones skull with a palm blast, Piccolo blows one up with a mouth beam, and Tsuru takes down the final one with a dodonpa. Only two remain standing.

Yamcha than takes charge and begins beating the crap out of the Saibamen. "this all you freaks got!" laughs Yamcha as he punches both into a cave "IDIOT! DONT GET COCKY!" Tsuru yells.

Both Saibamen stand back up beating badley. Yamcha begins laughing and calling them weak. Thats when Nappa orders the Saibamen to "combine". The Z Senshi watch in horror as the Saibamen hold onto eachother and fuse...

The new being that stands before them is a Giant Blue monster. It has the face of a Saibamen but is far bigger. Nappa laughs "you all stand no chance against the power of a Saibarute! its power level is twice that of a regular Saibamen!"

Yamcha charges the new monster and unleashes his wolf fang fist on it. The Saibarute moves back in pain than slashes Yamcha across the face. Yamcha moves back fast and kicks the Saibabrute in the chest hard. The two begin exchanging blows at a fast rate and Yamcha appears to have the slight edge. The Saibarute fires a giant ki wave at Yamcha who manages to hit it away barley, Yamcha than fires a uncharged Kamehameha wave at the Saibabrute hitting it in the back. The brute screams in pain than begins pleting Yamcha with ki blast after ki blast.

Yamcha afterimages behind the Saibabrute kicking it in the face. The Saibabrute blocks the attack barley tthan headbutts Yamcha hard. Yamcha than jumps back.

"your quite strong....damn strong...this is the perfect time to test my new technique!" yells Yamcha who begins forming a giant ball of energy in his hand.

Yamcha than connects the energy into his hand "whats he doing!" yelled Krillin.

Yamcha than lists his hand up, "its....amazin...g...what...one..can do with raw spirit energy...and ONES FIST!" yells Yamcha

"WOLF FANG SPIRT FIST!" yells Yamcha as his hand turns into a white aura. Before the Sabibrute can react Yamcha pelts it over and over with punch after punch causing it to stagger back in pain.

Nappa and Vegeta stand back in shock

Yamcha continues to pelt the beast than unleashes all of his energy into his final attack and the spirit ball goes from his hand into the brutes chest.

"HAVE IT!" yelled Yamcha placing the spirit ball into the Saibabrutes chest. The brute screamed in pain as the energy ball went straight through its chest blowing a whole through its stomach. The brute feel down screaming in pain.

"this...is one...for...the home team!" yelled Yamcha destroying the brute with a ki blast.

Yamcha than feel down "damn!, I used up ALL my energy with this attack!"

Nappa stood back in shock.

"You...damn...IDIOT! how dare yoU!" yelled Nappa lifting up his hand.

Nappa fired a ki blast straight at Yamcha, oblidrating him.

Krillin, Tenshinhan, and Chiaotzu stood back in anger. Their friend. Yammcha oblidirated...treated like a dog...

"he was out of energy! HE WAS DEFENSLESS!" yelled Krillin

"HAHAHAH he was weak so he died!" laughed Nappa throwing off his armor and powering up to his maximum

all of the Z-Senshi stood back in horror as Nappa reviled his true power

"give them a moment Nappa...a moment to shovel this shit of the battle field" laughed Vegeta

"shit.... ILL SHOW YOU!" yelled Krillin charging the Saiyans in anger

Saibabrute 2400
Yamcha 2450
Yamcha (Wolf Fang Spirit Ball) 3750
Yamcha (Tired from attack) 300
Nappa (energy blast) 3750
Nappa (Full Power) 7900
Krillin 2800

Nappa laughed

"GIVE ME A BREAK!" laughed Nappa as Krillin charged him

Krillin than after imaged into the air

"hu!" yelled Nappa

"Krillin than imaged behind Nappa and hit him hard in the back

"DAMN YOU! YOUR GONA PAY FOR THAT!" screamed Nappa smashing his foot into Krillins face sending him flying

The Z-Senshi then attacked. Roshi charged Nappa hitting him with a upercut, Nappa responded by kicking Roshi into the air (Roshi has learned to fly now)

"DAMN ANTS!" yelled Nappa

Cymbal and Tsuru charged Nappa from behind. Cymbal fired lightning hitting Nappa in the back. Cymbal than threw several punches and kicks at Nappa, who blocked each one with ease

"LAME!" laughed Nappa kicking Cymbal in the chest. The Demonic Namekian screamed before being pulvarized into the ground hard.

"BROTHER!" yelled Tambourine charging Nappa in rage. Tambourine was easily swatted away by a energy blast to the chest.

"HAHAHAH YOU FREAKS CANT FIGHT AN ELITE SAIYAN LIKE ME!" laughed Nappa

Tsuru hovered in the air, it was now or never.

He spotted Roshi, "lets do this for old times sake, my friend...for master Mutaito...my long lost friend"

for the first time in years, Crane smiled at Roshi.

This was not a smile of hate, but of friendship

"for Mutaito..." responded Tsuru....the hate of the past long leaving him

Meanwhile, Cymbal was experincing the beating of his life. Krillin had keept his distance and continued to attack Nappa but to no avail. Tambourine lay on the floor, his ribs broken from Nappas blast.

Tsuru put his hands together forming a triangle.

Roshi cupped his hands together aswell.

"Kik...."

"kame...."

"KIKOHO!"

"hame....ham...me...ha!!!!!!!!!"

the full power of the Kikoho and Kamehameha swarmed together, both blasts showing the truth of the matter.

The Crane Hermit and Turtle Hermit, were brothers once more.

"NAPPA LOOK OUT!!!!" screamed Vegeta

"wha!!!"

"KRILLIN...DODGE!!!!!" yelled Piccolo

Krillin moved out of the way at the last second.

Nappa lifted up his hands barley blocking the attack

"KIKOHO!!!"

"KAMEHAMEHA!"

both Roshi and Tsuru continued to pelt Nappa over and over with the attacks...

Nappa was injured from the blast....he felt a rib crack..

no...he wouldint die here...HE WAS A SAIYAN ELITE!!..COMMANDER OF THE SAIYAN ARMY!

"YOU FUCKING PESTS!" yelled Nappa moving out of the way of the next attacks

"OH NO...FUCK IT DIDINT WORK!" yelled Roshi

Nappa charged straight fourth into Tsuru

"CRANE!!!" screamed Roshi

Gohan and Tenshinhan screamed in rage

"MASTER!!!" they both yelled

"BROTHER!!!" screamed Tao

Nappa slammed his fist into Tsurus back hard. Tsuru screamed in pain

Roshi charged Nappa but was kicked away

Tsuru had used up all his energy on the Kikoho.

"rememb...er...me...old...f.r..i...e...nd" Tsuru said smiling

As Nappa punched a whole through his chest

Gohan and Tenshinhan and Tao screamed in anger charging Nappa

"DAMIT GOHAN!" yelled Piccolo charing Nappa

"I guess this is my fucking QUE" yelled Drum charging Nappa

Chiaotzou stood their in shock, tears coming to his eyes

"mas...t...e..r" he stammered falling down

yajirobe stood back, not wanting to get invoiloved

Korin followed

Powers levels so far

Tsuru-Sennin 3000
Roshi 1800
Roshi (Kamehameha) 2500
Tsuru (Kikoho) 8000
Nappa (Injured) 6000
Tsuru (loss of energy) 50

"no...crane!" roshi screamed in anger

tears came to his eyes...never had he thought it would end like this

"HAHAHAH SEE THAT! YOUR FRIEND WAS A LOSER SO HE GOT KILLED! THAT SIMPLE!"

before Nappa could respond he was met by a punch to the face from Roshi

than a kick to the back from Gohan

Tao, Tenshinhan, and Piccolo began giving Nappa the beat down of his life. Nappa could still defend himself but barley. They were joined by Korin and Drum.

"YOU WILL PAY FOR KILLING MY BROTHER YOU FUCKING BASTARD!" yelled Tao as he pulled out his sword blade and slashed Nappa in the mouth

"BASTARD!" screamed Nappa

Nappa was badly injured. "damn..that old bastards attack really FUCKED ME UP" thought Nappa "i have to...thats it!" Nappa smiled and flew back into the air

"WERE YOU GOING COWARD! YOU WILL PAY FOR INSULTING MY SCHOOL!" yelled Gohan enraged

Nappa than fired a ki blast at Tambourine

Gohan manuevered himself at the last second, Tambourine was his friend. At first he had hated him, but through training with him he had come to realize Tambourine truely cared for him. He put his life on the line for Gohan by training him.

Gohan placed himself in front of the blast at the last second, taking it full force.

"DAMIT....GOHAN YOU FUCKING IDIOT!" yelled Piccolo as him and Tao were meet with elbows to the back of their heads sending thwem flying

Tenshinhan charged Nappa manging to hit him across the face well he was distracted. Nappa coughed up blood

"FUCKING PEST!" yelled Nappa

Korin teleported behind Nappa kicking his back, Nappa reacted fast slamming Korin into the ground from the air

Drum meanwhile watched the fight, Tenshinhan was being pulvarized but keppt attacking. Nappa had ripped his arm off, but Tien just keept coming.

Drum focused his energy charging his attack

Piccolo and Tao charged Nappa from the ground up, along with Krillin who had recovered

"perfect" smiled drum

"DEMON...WAVE!!!!" yelled Drum unleashing his entire energy into the attack

Tao threw open the handle of his knife

"IVE BEEN WAITING TO TRY OUT THIS ATTACK....AND HERE IT IS...I WILL AVENGE YOU BROTHER...DIE FILTHY SAIYAN NO ONE MAKES A FOOL OUT OF THE CRANE SCHOOL!" yelled Tao pai Pai

"SUPERDODON RAY!" yelled Tao firing a purple beam at Nappa

"MASENKO-HA!" yelled Piccolo firing his own attack

Krillin fired a Kamehameha wave aswell

the attacks hit Nappa full force. Nappa barley had time to block but even than could barley move.

"we...got...him!" yelled Krillin

Roshi floated limpley in the air...they had done it...

power levels

Piccolo Daimao 5000
Gohan 4000
Drum 3750
Cyborg Tao 3200
Tsuru-Sennin 3000
Tenshinhan (Injured) 1400
Roshi (out of energy/injured) 50
Nappa (Injured) 3000
Tao Pai Pai (Super Dodonpa) 6000

Vegeta flew into the air, angry that Nappa had failed to finish the job. Angry that Nappa was losing.

"Nappa, allow me to finish this"

"but...Vegeta!. I can do this!"

"you've already made a fool out of yourself enough! Ill kill the rest of these idiots until Kakarot shows up!" Vegeta replied

Nappa flew to the ground in shame.

"is...this a joke...YOU BEAT US ALL!" laughed Drum

vegeta opened his hand firing a energy blast oblidirating Drum

"fool! dont talk!" laughed Vegeta

"his power...is far beyond the other one!" stammered Piccolo in shock.

Chiaotzu, enraged by his friends injury charged Vegeta

Vegeta reacted fast snapping Chiaotzus neck with a single kick

"CHIAOTZU...I...WILL...AV...E.......G...E.....Y..O...U....!" yelled Tenshinhan in rage

Tenshinhan fired a Kikoho at Vegeta who moved out of the way quickly

"hahaha..not bad..for a loser!" laughed Vegeta

Tenshinhan could barley breath, he had used up so much of his energy against Nappa through the Kikoho he could barley even move.

Before Vegeta could land the finishing blow, Tao and Piccolo charged the Saiyan Prince. They were met with two quick kicks sending them flying back

"so eager to die?! than step right up!"

Krillin stood back in fear

"this times as good as any!" Krillin stammered lifting up his hand

"destructo....disk!!!!" yelled Krillin firing a yellow orange disk at Vegeta

Vegeta moved swiftly away, not before the disk struck his side

"hahahah!" yelled Krillin laughing

"you...fucking PEST!!! HOW DARE YOU DAMAGE THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS ARMOR!!!!!"

Vegeta fired a energy blast at krillin, who dodged barley. the blast after shock hit Krillin hard enough to send him into the ground.

Tenshinhan fainted falling from the sky. He gathered the last of his energy.

It was now or never

"KIKOHO!!!!!" screamed Tenshinhan firing the powerful attack which maneged to hit Vegeta in the back

Vegeta became enraged, the attack had managed to damage his armor and hurt a bit. Before he could finish the three eyed warrior, Gohan charged into the fight screaming in rage.

"YOU...FUCKING BASTARD!!!" yelled Gohan hitting Vegeta hard in the face

vegeta coughed out blood

"DAMN BASTARD!" yelled Vegeta kicking Gohan across the mouth

Rage was fueling Gohan, his master, several of his friends. Tsuru, Cymbal, Drum, and Tambourine...

all dead by these evil Saiyans..

he had had enough

Gohan screamed in anger creating 18 arms

"WHAT!" yelled Vegeta moving back as each of the hands colladed with his face

"DIE!" yelled Gohan

Vegeta regained composure quickly blocking each of the strikes.

Vegeta began to get the upperhand, even Gohans rage couldint harm the Saiyan.

And The Saiyan wasint even going full out

"We...have to help him!" yelled Piccolo as Vegeta turned the tide of the fight and began beating Gohan to a pulp

"were powerless against this foe!" yelled Tao angrily. He wished he could somehow avenge his brother.

Piccolo charged into the battle kicking Vegeta

"Mr...Piccolo!" yelled Gohan happily

"GET OUT OF THE WAY KID!" yelled Piccolo

it was to late, Vegeta had fired a beam through Piccolos chest...

Piccolo grabbed his chest. He was dying.

"DAMN NAMEKIAN! HOW DARE HE ATTACK ME!" yelled Vegeta

Tao charged in hoping to turn the tide of the fight, Vegeta moved faster punching a whole through Taos chest

"thats...all...i...got..." stammered Tao before dying

"PATHETIC! JUST PATHETIC! AND TO THINK, YOU NAPPA AN ELITE SAIYAN COULDINT DEFEAT THESE WEAKLINGS!" laughed Vegeta screaming in rage towards Nappa

That was it. Nappa knew he had to do something. The Half Saiyan brat.

Nappa would finish him...

Nappa opened his mouth and fired a giant beam of energy towards the brat.

Gohan was injured badly, and the blast was headed straight towards him.

"no...Gohan!" yelled Piccolo throwing himself in between the blast

Piccolo was oblidirated by Nappas attack.

"HAHAHAHA...HOW CUTE! THE FUCKING NAMEKIAN GAVE HIS LIFE FOR THIS BRAT! HOW PATHETIC!" laughed Vegeta

Anger bouiled up inside Gohan. His mentor the man who had trained him, dead.

"ILL SHOW YOU!!!"

Gohan cupped his hands together angrily

"MASENKO...HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yelled Gohan firing a full powered Masenko at Vegeta

"WHAT!!!! HIS POWER LEVEL...ITS...OVER...9000!!!!!" yelled Vegeta grabbing his hands and barley blocking the attack.

Gohan looked down and saw Nappa standing back in fear. Gohan mustered all of his energy

"DODONPA!" yelled Gohan pointing his finger at Nappa

The beam hit Nappa straight through the chest.

Nappa feel down dying.

"that was...for you...master crane....master tao....maste...r..picc..ol...o...my friends"

stammered Gohan

The dust cleared, and Vegeta stood their unharmed

"you...fucking brat!" yelled Vegeta stammering

"damn...it didint work!" yelled Gohan

Vegeta moved fast punching Gohan in the face

Both Raditz and Goku had reached earth...

"damn...several powerful kis fading away!" screamed Goku speeding up on the nimbus

"damn!, the power...im sensing is incredible it must be Vegeta!" yelled Raditz.

Although Raditz had become far stronger, he still feared Vegeta.

And what he could do.

Saiyan Saga Part 2

Goku and Raditz arrive. Vegeta holds Gohan up after FUCKING HIM UP badly, than Goku grabs Gohan back. Vegeta prepares to finish off Nappa, but Goku saves him and tells Raditz to take Nappa away. Goku also greets Krillin/Gohan/Roshi noting their are all stronger.

The battlefield clears and its now Vegeta Vs Goku

"how dare you interfer with this! with my plans!" yelled Vegeta angrily

"he was your friend! you cant just throw him away like he's nothing!" Goku replied

"shut up! your nothing but a low class fucking dog! I'll show you the true power of the PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!!!!!" Vegeta shouted

Vegeta began powering up to his maximum, the ground began shaking

Gohan (enraged Masenko) 11,500
Vegeta 12,000 (relaxed)
Goku (Base) 10,000
Raditz 11,000
Nappa (Cripple) 50

Im going to change up this fight and make it different from the canon fight...some similiarties tho...

"why not join me Kakarot?...together we can rebuild the Saiyan empire and have the entire universe grvoloing at our feat!" laughed Vegeta

"no thanks...i've got everything I want right here.... now...were going to settle this...and your going to pay!" Goku replied

Vegeta charged Goku fast, slamming his foot into Gokus face. Vegeta began punching Goku fast and The Heroic Saiyan took the punches full force.

Goku backed up and afterimaged away than charged Vegeta and began throwing punch after punch at the evil Saiyan.

Vegeta laughed, and blocked each punch with ease

"not bad...for a LOW LEVEL!" laughed Vegeta slamming both of his hands into Goku sending him flying into a cave

*note their fighting at the same place they did in the series, both moved out towards the area...

Goku recovered before being punched in the chest hard by Vegeta. Vegeta than began pummeling Goku over and over. Goku spit out blood his body barley being able to handle the pummeling.

"YOUR NOTHING...BUT A LOW CLASS!!!" laughed Vegeta enjoying every moment.

Goku was sent flying into the caves wall, gasping for breath Goku spit out blood. His ribs were broken, the heroic Saiyan was badly injured

Goku smiled

"man...he's really tough! gona have to step this up a bit!"

"KAIOKEN X2!!!" yelled Goku as a red aura surronded him

"Kaio-wha?!"

before Vegeta could finish his sentence, he was met by a fist to his face. Vegeta recovered and kicked Goku hard across the mouth than kneed him back. Goku moved fast and began hitting Vegeta full force.

Goku than moved in fast, and delievered a strong blow to Vegetas stomach. Vegeta screamed in pain as he coughed up blood.

"this ones for.......PICCOLO!!!" yelled Goku slamming his foot into Vegetas back sending the Saiyan flying back

"this ones for...YAMCHA!!!!" yelled Goku elbowing Vegeta hard in the jaw

"AND THIS ONES...FOR TENSHINHAN!!!" yelled Goku upercutting Vegeta hard in the mouth.

Vegeta recovered badly injured

"you...fucking LOW CLASS DOG! HOW DARE YOU MOCK THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!"

Enraged Vegeta charged Goku and the two began throwing punches at a fast rate. Goku had the edge, although Kaioken was starting to wear down his body. Vegeta headbutted Goku in the face hard than came up with a knee to the face.

Goku reacted fast, and kneed Vegeta back hard.

Both knees conected, sending a shockwave through the air.

Meanwhile, Gohan, Cymbal, Krillin, and Roshi were recovering from the battle.

"I can...feel...their power! their...ki is tremendous!" stammered Cymbal

"yes...." nodded Roshi "their on a whole nother level than us..."

"my dad can do it! he can defeat that Saiyan!"  said Gohan happily

"yeah, if anyone can Gokus the man!" krillin replied

"lets hope so..." nodded Roshi darkley...

Levels

Goku 10,000
Vegeta 18,000
Goku (KKX2) 20,000

Meanwhile, Raditz had flown Nappa away from the battle field

"Radit....z....HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET SO POWERFUL! YOU WERE A WEAKLING BEFORE!" shouted Nappa

"shut your mouth Nappa!...I underwent training with Kakarot under Kaio-Sama the lord of worlds! my powers surpass even you! I am a weakling no more!" laughed Raditz

"why....why did Kakarot save me!" stammered Nappa

he was shocked....He had killed most of Kakarots friends, ruthless'ley torrmented earth..and yet this Saiyan whos power was far above his spared him

"my brother is far to compassionate and forgiving for my tastes...he likes to give people a second chance...personally I would kill you were you stand!" Radittz replied

After this, Nappa turns over a new leaf....He is accepted by Goku, and at first he swears he will become Gokus minion and do whatever he says, however Goku just tells him to be a good person. He explains he served Vegeta because he wanted to continue to serve the Saiyan race and continue to help its glory thrive...Nappa also apologizes through Goku (communication) to The Z-Senshi (who are on King Kais Planet) for killing them. Tao, Tsuru, Piccolo Daimao, and Drum insult him but Nappa remains calm...

Back to the battle

Kaioken was wearing Goku down, although Vegeta was more injured and losing power fast do to injuries (Goku had broken Vegetas ribs and one of his arms)) the strain of Kaioken was wearing Goku down... he wasint doing so well ether. One of his ribs was broken and he was unable to move his other leg.

"I have...to end this!" thought Goku

Vegeta flew up into the air

"damn...you...Kakrot!" he yelled

"i use...this power to destroy planets! I am ashamed I have to use it on a low level such as yourself!, but you've given me no CHOICE!" laughed Vegeta as he began to form a moon ball

"this attack will take up tons of my power... but it will be worth it to see you DIE!!!"

Goku than realized what Vegeta was doing...

Raditz had told him about the moon ball... The invention of the moon ball by the Saiyans in order to obtain Oozaru...

Goku moved fast

"RADITZ TOLD ME ALL ABOUT THIS!" Goku yelled and smashed his foot into Vegetas chest

Vegeta lost concentration and screamed in pain

"DAMN! you DISTRUPTED MY CONCENTRATION!" Vegeta yelled

"NO MATTER! I DONT NEED OOZARU TO DEFEAT A LOW CLASS BAFFOON LIKE YOU!!!" laughed Vegeta charging Goku

Gokus Kaioken had worn off...and he was now back to his regular base..

Vegeta moved fast and began beating the shit out of Goku giving it everything he had. First he blasted Goku in the face with a ki blast than slammed his foot into Gokus jaw breaking our heroes jaw, grabbed his arm and broke it, than he began thrasing Goku with punch after punch sending the heroic Saiyan flying into the ground.

"now....you...die!" Vegeta yelled

Goku knew it was now or never...he had to push himself past his very limits

Vegeta moved his hand back as a purple orb surronded him

"Gyarikku....HOU!!!" yelled Vegeta unleashing a giant purple energy blast at Goku

Goku calmed himself...

"KAIOKEN X4!!!!!" Goku screamed as a red aura surronded him

Goku thrust himself full speed at the purple orb ramming through the energy wave

"WHAT!! WHAT THE FUCK IS HE DOING!!" yellled Vegeta in shock as Goku rammed his body through the wave

Levels

Goku 1500 (badly injured, arm broken, ribs cracked)
Vegeta 3000 (badly injured)
Vegeta (Gyarikku Hou) 8900
Goku (KKX4) 10,000

Vegeta screamed as Goku rammed his way through the blast

"IM COMING AT YOU WITH EVERYTHING IVE GOT!" Goku yelled barley able to focus the strain of the power taking its toll on him

"YOUR JUST A LOW LEVEL...I AM THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!! YOU ARE NOTHING, NOW DIE!!!" Vegeta screamed increasing his power

Goku began to struggle. He was nearing Vegeta but the purple waves power was insane

"AAAAAA!!!" Goku screamed

Goku rammed himself full speed into Vegetas chest (the same move Goku used on Piccolo Daimao to win the martial arts tournament)

Vegeta screamed in pain, bleeding from his mouth and hit the ground badly injured and barley alive. Goku fell down at the same instant.

Vegeta fell to the ground, unconsecious and beaten to death

Goku still had a small bit of energy left and walked up to Vegeta. His arm was broken, so was his leg and blood trickled down from his lip.

"damn...de...f..e...a..t...e...d.....b..y...a....l..........oo....w.....l...e...v....e..l" Vegeta stammered spitting out heaps of blood

"leave this planet...now" Goku replied

"WHAT!" Vegeta stammered crawling towards the pod

"you heard me! I'll show you compassion...killing you know wouldint make the situation anybetter! besides...your a Saiyan like me and I wont kill one of the last of my race...maybe some day you could be a good guy even!" Goku replied smiling

"you...damn...fool" Vegeta stammered before crawling into the pod

"you...id...i...ot....ha...a....w...hen I get my power back ill return to earth and kill ALL OF YOU!" laughed Vegeta before blasting off

Power levels

Vegeta (Post Gokus KKX4 attack, beaten near death) 10
Goku (tired from KKX4, badly injured) 300

Goku injured badly, is in the hospital. Krillin, Gohan, Cymbal, Roshi, Bulma and PIANO (lmao) dcide to go to Namek to gather the dragonballs as soon as possible. Goku will leave ocne he's healed with Raditz and Nappa.

Power levels

Gohan (Zenkai) 5500
Cymbal 1800
Krillin 2800
Roshi 1800
Roshi (100%) 3000
Roshi (50%) 2300
Bulma 4
Piano 50
Goku (Zenkai) 14,000
Nappa (Zenkai) 9200
Raditz 10,000

Goku is in the hospital, recovering. Like the story he will leave for Namek (with Raditz and Nappa) as soon as he heals.

Gohan, Krillin, Cymbal, Roshi, Bulma, and Piano set out for Namek first (like in the story). Dr. Briefs builds a gravity chamber for our heroes and a training room....

Vegeta and Frieza are both heading to Namek (like in the story) and Frieza is bringing his minions.

A new revelation also occurs. Frieza has kept one other Saiyan alive besides Vegeta, Nappa, and Raditz. Turles. And all of Turleses minions work for Frieza...

Piano also dosint want to go to Namek, and is constantly getting yelled at by Cymbal, Krillin, and Roshi for being a pussy.

On King Kais, everyone quickly catches Bubbles and hits Gregory. Except for Chappa, Nam, and Giran who have still yet to catch bubbles. Devil and Mummy have yet to even ajust to the gravity...

Everyoine is training with King Kai, but Piccolo, Drum, and Tambourine who think the training is stupid and ridicolous. Piccolo is sparring hardcore with Drum and Tambourine instead.

Our heroes arrive on Namek...

several days have passed...

the levels are...

Gohan 18,000
Krillin 16,000
Cymbal 12,000
Roshi 13,000
Roshi (50%) 15,000
Roshi (Buff) 20,000
Tao Pai Pai 20,000
Tsuru-Sennin 21,000
Tenshinhan 26,000
Tenshinhan (Kaioken) 52,000
Piccolo Daimao 65,000
Drum 45,000
Tambourine 20,000
Yamcha 17,000
Kaio-Sama/King Kai 18,000 (went up do to having to fight his students and hardcore training)
Yajirobe (forgot to menton him...Vegeta blew him up...) 10,000
Chiaotzu 7000
Giran 900
Nam 860
Chappa 850
Devil 200
Mummy 180
Korin 13,000
Gregory 1135
Bubbles 250
Amond 17,000
Daiz 19,000
Caco 20,000
Dodoria 21,000
Laseki 10,000
Rasin 10,000
Frieza (First Form) 100,000
Vegeta (Zenkai) 24,000
Turles 95,000 (he is the only one of Friezas minions besides Ginyu able to suppress his power level)
Zarbon 22,000

On Namek, Vegeta takes down Kiwi right away. Frieza orders Amond, Caco, Daiz, Dodoria, Laseki, Rasin to find and kill Vegeta...

Our heroes split up. Gohan and Krillin, and Roshi/Cymbal. Bulma has customized two radars for both groups... Paino stays with Bulma... Dende also joins the group, as the same events pertain in the show with him... (Guru Power Up will come later)...

(cant remember those two purple dudes full names...so ima just say laseki and rasin...)

Vegeta encounters Dodoria and kills him like in the show...

Gohan and Krillin (note they had killed the Frieza Scouts before, forgot to menton it) have already found one dragon ball...thats when their encountered by Caco and Amond.

Both demand Krillin/Gohan hand over their dragon ball, but our heroes refuse.

A fight begins, Caco Vs Gohan and Krillin Vs Amond

Caco and Gohan start out fighting evenly.

Amond comes at Krillin fast, Krillin dodges several of his punches than smashes Amond in the face with a right hook sending Amond into one of the namekian mountains. Amond flys back up towards Krillin.

"ha...not to bad...for a baldy....but im going to destroy you...just give up...we can do this the easy way or the hard way...the choice is yours...and tell us where Vegetas at...Lord Frieza is damned pissed at him for his little rebellion...fucking monkey"

"shutt up! and I dont know were Vegeta is, hes not our ally and never will be! both you and your goons and Vegeta are the same in my eyes"

"wha...?" Amond stammers

before he can react, Krillin punches him in the face. Amond spits out blood.

"FUCKING COCKY MIDGET!" Amond screams than slams his elbow into Krillins chest hard. Krillin cluthes his chest than is met with a Ki blast to his face by Amond.

"NOT BAD...not many people can stand up to one of Friezas elite men! but this is were YOU DIE!" Amond screamed unleashing a extreme amount of punches on Krillin.

Krillin backed up, and the two began exchanging blows at a fast rate. Amond seemed to have the slight edge, and was landing slightly more hits.

"your....WEAK!!!" screamed Amond drop kicking Krillin hard in the face

krillin recovered fast "man...this guy is tough! im gona have to give it all i've got just to stay alive!" thought Krillin.

Amond continued his enraged attack on Krillin, Krillin backed up flying into the air.

"hahahahah! your mying now fool!" laughed Amond listing up his hand

"super..."

before Amond could finish Krillin shouted "SOLAR FLARE"

Amond screamed in pain barley able to see

"NOWS MY CHANCE!" yelled Krillin

"Kienzan!!!!!!!" yelled Krillin forming a yellow disk out of his hands

Amond was still blinded by the Solar flare, finally he could see again.

A yellow disk was heading straight for his face

"DAMIT!" Amond screamed and threw himself out of the way. The disk struke him across the chest.

"Damn...I couldint get his NECK!" yelled Krillin

"you...fucking BASTARD! THAT FUCKING HURT! I AM AN ELITE WARRIOR YOU ARE NOTHING!"

Krillin smirked "come prove it! for an elite warrior you still do get cut just like the rest of Friezas goons!"

Amond than smiled

"we....ll...see how YOU FUCKING LIKE THIS!"

Amond began spinning around extremeley fast

"what...the hell...is he doing!" Krillin screamed out loud

"SUPER........KINZEAN!!!!!!!!" screamed Amond

"WHAT!" screamed Krillin

a orange like disk was flying towards Krillin, and fast

Krillin dodged at the last second, but the disk slashed him across the arm.

"DAMN!, HE GOT ME!" screamed Krillin

"IM RIGHT BEHIND YOU ASSHOLE!" laughed Amond

before Krillin knew what was happining,, he was blasted straight into a mountain

"HAHAHAHA! that will teach you to mess with an ELITE!" laughed Amond as he continued to pelt the mountain side with ki blasts.

Krillin had to think. He was outmatched in power here. As Krillin lay hidden under the rocks he developed a plan.

He suppressed his ki to zero.

"hahahahah! your ki has completely disapeearredd! you were oblidirated!@" laughed Amond

he looked up to see Caco fighting Gohan evenly.

"damn...I can't believe Cacos having trouble with that little pest! guess I better go help!"

Amond began to fly towards Caco and Gohan

Krillin cupped his hands together. It was now or never

"kame....ha...me.....haaaa!!!!!!" yelled Krillin unleashing a kamehameha wave on Amond

"WAHT THE HELL IS THIS!" screamed Amond grabbing his hands together

Amond barley blocked the attack but his armor was damaged slightly

"BASTARD!" yelled Amond "YOUR POWER LEVEL WAS DOWN TO ZERO! HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY BE ALIVE!" Amond screamed firing several more ki blasts at the mountain

Before he could react, Krillin appeared behind him and elbowed him hard in the back sending him flying down

"WHA!!!"

"KINZEAN!" yelled Krillin tossing the yellow disk at Amond

Amond had no time to dodge, the disk sliced him in half

"damm...i...t...ho...w..c..o...u...l...d..a...a..i...a....n..e...l....i..t...e...b...e..d.e...f.e..a..t...e...d"

Caco looked down in shock before he was met by a fist to the face by Gohan

Krillin cupped his hands together, putting all of his energy into his next attack

"kame....ha....me....ha!!!!!!" yelled Krillin unleashing the blue waveon Caco

the cyborg took the full damage as the attack him from behind

"NOW GOHAN!" yelled Krillin

"RIGHT!" screamed Gohan lifting up his hand

Gohan put his finger to his head and concentrated his energy

"light...of...death!" screamed Gohan

the purple beam went straight through Cacos chest, killing him.

(yes, Gohan can use the Special Beam Canon in this story)

Meanwhile, Roshi and Cymbal encounter Daiz, Laseki, and Rasin

"damn...I can sense several powerful fighters coming this way!"  yelled Cymbal

so far they had yet to gather a dragonball

"suppress your ki even lower!" yelled Roshi

but it was too late as the three approched Roshi and Cymbal

"what do...we have here? minions of Vegeta?" laughed Daiz

"you'd be wise to leave here, before we get serious" replied Roshi

"their weaklings! power levels of 150 and 200! Vegeta must pick his minions from the bottom of the barrel! guess he has to get everyone he meets to join his little army!" laughed Rasin

"ill fucking show you!" yelled Cymbal before powering up

Daizs face turned from mocking to shock

"7000....8000....9000...ITS OVER 9000 AND RISING! 12,000!" screamd Daiz

Rasin and Lakasei stood back in shock

"you two deal with him...he should be a good fight for you" smiled Daiz

Rasin and Laksei charged Cymbal who flew into the air

"you pack quite a punch! but together your no match for us!" laughed Rasin

"im Lakasei!"

"im Rasin!"

"fools..your names mean nothing...why should I care" laughed Cymbal

"because...were going to oblidirate you!" laughed Rasin

"why should I care about your names...when very soon...you wont exist.." smiled Cymbal firing lightning from his hands at Rasin who barley dodged

"YOU BASTARD!" yelled Rasin attacking Cymbal

the two attacked Cymbal in a furious assault. Cymbal smashed Rasin hard with his tail, but than was punched hard by Lakasei. Cymbal recovered and fired a Masenko at the two who put their hands together and fired a combined energy blast at Cymbal who barley maneged to hit it away.

Meanwhile, Roshi simply starred down Daiz

"what the hell you looking at old man" laughed Daiz

"I know your kind...you think you can simply walk around destroying as you please...but hear me now villain..your rampage...your destruction...ends TODAY!" Roshi replied powering up

"10,000....11,000....12,000...."

"hahaha...not bad for an old timer! but my power levels much higher than that!"

Before Roshi could react, Daiz appeared behind him and punched him hard in the face. Daiz than began hitting Roshi with a furry of kicks and punches. Roshi was driven back fast.

"THAT ALL YOU GOT OLD TIMER!!!" laughed Daiz

Roshi swung his fist at Daiz who grabbed his hand with ease

"WEAKLING!" laughed Daiz kicking Roshi hard in the gut causing the master to cough up blood.

Daiz than elbowed Roshi hard in the face sending him to the ground.

"ha,...HAHAHAHAHA PATHETIC!" laughed Daiz

"i...might...just...suprise you!" yelled Roshi powering up to his 50% form.

"WHAT! 14,500!" yelled Daiz before he was met with an elbow to the face

Daiz respondedd by kicking Roshi into the air. Roshi appeared behind Daiz and slammed his foot into his back. Daiz caught the kick than threw Roshi into the aiur before charging him. The two exchanged a volly of punches and kicks.

"HAHAHAHAH...YOUR MYING!" laughed Daiz punching Roshi hard in the face. roshi had no timme to react before he was thrown into a mountain.

"FUCKING ASSHOLE!" screamed Daiz

Roshi cupped his hands together.

he would defeat this Villain

"kame....ha...me....ha!!!!" yelled Roshi firing a powerful kamehameha wave at Daiz

Daiz lifted up his hands

"nice try geezer! ill fucking block it!"

Roshi than lifted up his hands and changed direction of the wave

"WHA!!!" Daiz screamed as the wave hit him hard in the back

"YOU BASTARD! YOULL PACK FOR THAT!" screamed Daiz

he was met with a kick to the face by Roshi hard. Daiz punched Roshi back than flew up into the air and formed a red energy ball with his hand

"METEOR...BALL!!!" yelled Daiz firing the red orb at Roshi

"WHA!!!!" Roshi yelled barley avoiding the attack

"YOUR TO SLOW OLD MAN!" laughed Daiz blasting ROshi in the face with a energy blast

Roshi fell back than got up

"just give up...you can give a fight...but your not on my level!" Daiz replied

"foolish child...ive been holding back my power...my true power..." Roshi replied

"TRUE POWER!? GIVE ME A FUCKING BREAK! YOUR NOTHING TO ME! I AM DAIZ ONE OF FRIEZAS TOP ELITES...YOU WILL FUCKING KNOW YOUR PLACE OLD FUCKING RAT!" yelled Daiz

Roshi than began powering up. his muscles bulked up massively

"WHAT!" Daiz screamed reading the power level off his scouter

"16,000....17,000....18,000....19,000....20,000! WHAT TH!!" before Daiz could respond he was met by a punch to the chest from Roshi. Daiz screamed in pain and clutched his chest. Roshi than punched him several times in the fast before throwing him into the air.

"this is...insane! he should be nowere near my level of power!" stammered Daiz clutching his chest.

"ill give you one last chance...leave here and never come back!" replied Roshi

Roshi has learned to fight in his maximum form but only uses it as a last resort

Daiz didint think twice before running off

"hahahah! you fool! ill get Lord Frieza, Turles, or Zarbon! than we'll see whos laughing!"

Roshis face turned to shock. So, these men were minions of the other villain looking for the dragonballs. Frieza?.

Daiz speed off.

Meanwhile, Cymbal was having the fight of his life. Rasin and Lakasei were fighting as one unit and wooping Cymbals ass. He was barley able to defend himself

"LETS END THIS NOW BROTHER!" laughed Rasin as the two put their hands together for a combo ki blast

"you...wont...end ANYTHING! screamed Cymbal putting his finger to his head

before the two could fire their bhlast, Cymbal launched his special beam canon straight throughRasins chest killing him.

"NO! RASIN!" screamed Lkasei

"YOUR FUCFKING MYING!" screamed Cymbal as Lakasei took off running in fear

"LORD FRIEZA! LORD FRIEZA! FRRR"

before he could finish he was hit from behind by a masenko killing him.

Daiz flew through Namek, clutching his chest. Barley able to breath. Who the hell were these bastards! the old man beat the living shit out of him.

Thats when he encountered Vegeta.

"so....Daiz...what brings you to his part of the woods!" laughed Vegeta

"Vegeta! listen...I know we've had some problems in the past but we can work them out! we can team up! your crews pretty powerful an"

"crew?" replied Vegeta

"yes..the old man...that one weird looking minion and the bald one...also a little kid!" replied Daiz

Vegeta had heard enough

"so those bastards from earth are here as wel;l! proabably to revive their dead friends!"

Vegeta smiled evily

"you know...Daiz...im having a pretty good day..I just took out Dodoria...and Kiwi....I think im going to add you to that list!"

"no...no...VEGETA!!!.WA..I..!!"

before Daiz could respond, Vegeta had destroyed him with a ki blast.

"so....those bastards from earthlings are here arnt they?" Vegeta thought

One word popped into his head.

Kakarot.

Vegeta than encounters Zarbon..after this he is enraged and gathers/steals a dragon ball from Krillin..

Frieza is enraged that several of his elites are dead and calls the Ginyu Force to Namek.

Our Heroes are still trying to find away to get all seven balls...Vegeta has one ball which he has hidden in the lake...

Vegeta takes on Zarbon. The fight is easily in Vegetas favor and he DOMINATES Zarbon. However, Zarbon turns Monster and PUMMELS Vegeta bringing him in.

Vegeta 24,000
Zarbon 22,000
Monster Zarbon 32,000

(zarbon is stronger here than in the series)

Meanwhile, on the ship to earth Goku, Raditz, and Nappa continue to train in high amounts of gravity and grow stronger...

Goku 60,000
Raditz 55,000
Nappa 58,000

Vegeta after being healed encounters Zarbon. He attempts to get the Dragon Ball from Piano and Bulma before Zarbon interupts him.

(note, unlike the series Zarbon will not get cocky)

Vegeta 30,000

Vegeta beats 1st form Zarbons ASS badly, forcing Zarbon to transform.

"haha...Vegeta...you patheic fool! you wont defeat me in this fight! i already defeated you once...im going to enjoy killing you!" Zarbon laughed in his beast form

"haha...thats what you think fool! I've grown far stronger since before...now you will meet your DEMISE AT THE HANDS OF THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!"

(note Vegeta has decided to hunt down our heroes later, and they know that Vegeta is on Namek)

Vegeta instead of grabbing sand charges Zarbon, Zarbon dodges than slams his knee into Vegetas chest and headbutts him. Vegeta flys into the air and Zarbon fires several energy blasts at Vegeta. The Saiyan dodged fast than kicked Zarbon in the face. The two began a vicious battle, but its clear Zarbon has the edge.

"hahahahah! your stronger Vegeta! but not even you can compare to my might!" laughed Zarbon before rammming his fist into Vegetas chest causing the Saiyan to split out blood

"damn....you!" screamed Vegeta angirly throwing an assault of punches at the beast. Zarbon throws several back.

"you...Saiyans are a pathetic lot! I have no clue why Lord Frieza keeps even Turles around! you all shall die!" screamed Zarbon

"Turles is a traitor! and he will die to! but first its your turn!" screamed Vegeta angirly punching Zarbon in the jaw. Zarbon screamed than Vegeta elbowed him in the chest and fired a ki blast hitting him hard. Zarbon flew back than charged Vegeta ramming him in the face with a elbow.

"you can never defeat me you low life!" screamed Zarbon swinging his foot at Vegetas gut

Vegeta blocked barley before being hammered across the face with a punch. And another. And another.

Vegeta coughed up blood. As he was being beating he had a revelation. Zarbon was to strong.

He was fighting at the brink of his limits, and Zarbon was simply taking everything he had . Sure, he had injured the beast but he was far more injured.

Vegeta was met with a kick to the back and he screamed in pain.

"LIGHTS OUT PRINCE!" Zarbon yelled pummeling Vegeta through the chest with a punch than grabbing him in a body lock

"AAAA" Vegeta screamed as Zarbon rammed him full force into the ground hard than began pelting him with ki blasts.

a minute past, nothing could be heard from Vegeta.

"hahahah! I did it! I defeated that bastard! pathetic Saiyan!" laughed Zarbon.

"his power...its...insane!" stammered Piano in shock

Zarbon flew straight towards Paino and Bulma and Bulma shreeked in fear.

"now...I know your with those pathetic maggots who killed Daiz, Amond, and Caco, so tell me were your hiding the last dragon ball!" laughed Zarbon

Piano stood back in fear "i don...t..know...Ve...g..e..t.a....h..a..s...i..t!" stammered Paino

"than...you die...HAHAHAHAH! FREAK!" laughed Zarbon lifting up his hands

Little did Zarbon know, Vegeta was alive...his power had dropppped radically, he was near death.

But that didint stop him from charing his best attack from under the rubble of the mountain

"GYRAIKKU HOU!!!!!!!" screamed Vegeta firing everything he had into his final attack

"WHA!!!" Zarbon screamed before being hit by the blast. Zarbon was sent into the ground injured badly.

"he...s alive!" stammered Bulma

Vegeta flew straight into Zarbon headbutting him

"how...I killed you!" screamed Zarbon

Vegeta was bleeding from his lip. Barley able to move his arms and injured all over.

"ha....you fool! you understimated me Zarbon...I may be injured but I have enough power left to finish you!"

Zarbon grabbed his arm, barley able to move it

"NEVER SAIYAN!" screamed Zarbon charging Vegeta

the two began punching and kicking eachother at a extremley fast rate. Vegeta was badly injured. Barley even able to move. Zarbon wasint in much better shape.

Both were clinging to life.

Zarbon slammed his fist hard through Vegetas chest and the Saiyan screamed in pain coughing out tons of blood.

"GOODBYE! PRINCE!" Zarbon yelled thrusting his fist at Vegeta

Vegeta reached for the ground, fast.

This was his last chance.

Vegeta grabbed a small ball of sand and dodged the punch barley throwing the sand into Zarbons face.

Zarbon screamed, unable to see and Vegeta mustered up all his strength.

"DIE ZARBON!" Vegeta screamed punching a whole through the monsters chest

Zarbon stood in shock. Barley able to move.

"Vegeta...listen to me! we can team up! defeat Frieza together! I never liked him! give me a chance!"

Vegeta laughed

"if a weakling like you could be useful in defeating Frieza...than he wouldint be Frieza!" Vegeta stammered before blowing Zarbon up with a ki blast.

Zarbon exploded.

Vegeta grabbed his arm barley able to move than collapsed. He mustered up all of his strength and got up and walked towards Bulma and Piano

"dont hurt us!" stammered Bulma

Vegeta than remebered something. the beans. the same beans that that fool Kakrot had given to Nappa that healed him insantley!

he needed one

"give...me...a..b...e..a..n!" screamed Vegeta

Piano shuttered. Vegeta was near death but even at his current power he could easily destroy him. Reluctantly he handed Vegeta a sensu.

Vegeta laughed

"I feel...Incrediable! the might of a true Saiyan warrior! thanks for the beam Namekian Freak!" laughed Vegeta before kicking Piano hard causing him to fall down in pain

"be lucky I held back my power enough not to kill you!" Vegeta laughed before flying off

"now to find those earthlings...Ill kill them...their nowhere near my power! my power is greater than Kakarot could ever dream!" laughed Vegeta as he flew off

Levels

Vegeta 45,000 (Zenkai)
Piano 50
Bulma 4
Vegeta (Near Death) 100
Vegeta (Against Zarbon post injuries) 5000
Zarbon (hit by Galick Gun) 5200

Cymbal, Roshi, Krillin, and Gohan all flew together with Dende who introduced them to Guru. Guru unlocked all of their potentials...

Thats when several insane power levels were sensed....The Ginyu Force had been called in by Frieza, and enraged at Zarbons death Frieza blasted off leaving Turles to guard the ship and the six remaning dragon balls..

Levels

Vegeta 45,000
Gohan 30,000 (Guru)
Krillin 28,000 (Guru)
Roshi (100%, Guru) 27,000
Roshi (50%, Guru) 22,000
Cymbal 19,000
Roshi (Base) 14,000

Vegeta encounters our heroes, and tells them of the massive powers approching. Of the Ginyu Force. Vegeta has also gotten his dragon ball out of the lake just to be safe. As said above after the Ginyu Force comes to Namek, Frieza blasts off to Gurus. Instead of helping, Nail stays behind to fight Frieza.

Also, Similiar to the show the Ginyus arrive and Ginyu steals Vegetas ball. He returns to Frieza and Frieza cannot awaken the dragon do to not knowing Namekian. Because of this he goes to Gurus and encounters Nail (who stays behind as said above).

(Dioluge between Turles and Ginyu will come later, as they are rivals)

The Ginyus do rocket paper sisscors, and it is determend that Burter will fight Vegeta first.

"hahahah! knock him out mate! kick this whiny Saiyan wankas ass!" laughed Jeice

"I wanted to fight Vegeta!" Guldo stammered angrily

"dont worry Guldo! youll get your turn soon!" laughed Recoome

"their power levels...are all enormmus! that purple guy was far stronger than all of them!" Krillin stated

"yes....Vegeta may have improved, but enough to fight one of these brutes? doubtful..." Roshi said darkley

"who cares about that bastard Vegeta! he killed tons of our friends on earth and killed many Namekians, I hope he dies like the sack of shit he is!" Cymbal stated

"no...Vegeta is our last hope...if he cant hold off till Goku and Raditz arrive we will be finished...as much as I hate to say it...Vegeta is our ally for the time...our survival depends on him.." Roshi replied

"hahahah! what can a pathetic Saiyan like you hope to do against me an elite warrior and the fastest in the universe!" laughed Burter

Vegeta smiled

"ill show you Burter!, My power is far greater than it once was before now witness the might of a true Saiyan warrior!" screamed Vegeta as he began to power up to his max

"WHAT!" Burter screamed in shock

Jeice couldint believe it

"burta! be careful! his power levels above yours mate! hes at 45,000!" screamed Jeice

"WHAT POWER!" stammered Gohan covering his hands in order not to be blown back

Cymbal stood in shock

"Vegetas...gona destroy him!" stammered Krillin happily. They might just survive until Goku came, thought Krillin.

Roshi didint look so sure

"now, your mying BURTER!" screamed Vegeta charging Burter. Burter moved fast dodging than flying into the air.

"DAMN PUNK!" Burter screamed as Vegeta began throwing punch after punch at him

Burter dodged each one barley, before being hit in the chest hard by Vegeta

"DAMN BASTARD!" yelled Burter throwing a kick at Vegeta who blocked fast

Vegeta slammed his elbow into Burter sending him into the ground than fired several ki blasts at him.

Burter narrowly avoded him

"hahaha! you call yourself an elite!? your power is NOTHING COMPARED TO MYING!" Vegeta laughed

"Vegetas doing it! that guy cant even hit him!" Gohan yelled happily

"Burta! stop fooling around! get serious!" Stammered Jeice.

"I cant believe...vegeta is matching Burter!" Guldo stammered. he never knew it was possible for a weakling like Vegeta to match an elite Ginyu Force member.

Burter got up and smiled.

"now Vegeta...im going to destroy you...theirs something I've been holding back..."

"whats that! you cant defeat me! your nothing!" laughed Vegeta

"MY SPEED!" yelled Burter

levels

Recoome 47,000
Jeice 46,000
Vegeta 45,000
Burter 43,000
Guldo 10,000

(note Burters power comes from his speed, which he hasint been using yet)

"please...a weakling like you couldint hold a candle to me!" laughed Vegeta

before he could react he was hit with a upercvut to the jaw

"I couldint...even...see..him!" stammered Gohan

"what the hell! how the hell did you do that!" stammered Vegeta

"atta boy Burta! lay this Saiyan Trash out!"

Burter (Full Speed) 50,000

"hahah...you cant keep up with me! im the fastest in the universe!" laughed Burter dodging punch after punch from Vegeta

"damn...his speed is unreal!" stammered Vegeta before Burter smashed his fist into his chest. Vegeta gasped in pain.

"weakling!" laughed Burter punching Vegeta over and over

Recoome smilied, this would be a good beatdown.

"Vegetas...getting destroyed! he cant even see him!" stammered Krillin

the beatdown continued as Burter savagley beat Vegeta. Burter than began pleting the Saiyan with ki blasts.

"come on monkey! thought you were gona defeat me!" Burter laughed

Anger filed Vegeta. He wouldint lose. He was done being Frieza lapdog.

No more would one make a fool of the prince of all Saiyans.

Burter thrust his foot into Vegeta who moved fast and grabbed Burters foot throwing him into the air

"not bad Veggie! you got some skill!" laughed Burter as he dodged punch after punch.

Vegeta somehow maneged to land a punch to Burters chest. Burter screamed in pain than Vegeta kicked Burter hard. Burter responded by firing several punches at Vegeta and Vegeta responded by fighting back with an army of his own.

"damn! he's actually keeping up with Burter!" stammered Guldo

"yeah...if Burter loses were one short on our pose!" Stated Recoome

"Hey Burta! stop toying with this monkey and get serious!" yelled Jeice

Burter lashed out kicking Vegeta into the air

"give up MONKEY!" yelled Burter spitting out blood

"you made me bleed bastard!" yelled Burter spitting out blood

Vegeta flew into the air. This was his last chance.

"FINAL....FLASH!!!" yelled Vegeta firing a giant yellow energy ball at Burter.

"WHAT!" screamed Burter.

Burter barley dodged the blast. A bit hit him in the arm injurying him.

"DAMN YOU!" yelled Burter

fuck...thought Vegeta. He had put everything he had into that attack. The bastard was just to damn fast.

"DAMN IT! HE MISSED!" yelled Cymbal

"now its my turn BASTARD!" yelled Burter lifting up his hand

"PURPLE SPIRAL FLASH!" yelled Burter as a purple spiral surronded him. Burter hit Vegeta with several energy blasts over and over sending the Saiyan to the ground.

Vegeta lay on the ground, barley alive.

"Gohan we have to help[ Vegeta! I dont want to but he can help us defeat these guys!" replied Krillin

Gohan nodded.

Burter lifted up his hand

"hey Burta! finish this monkey trash!" laughed Jeice

Before Burter launch his blast he was attacked by Gohan who threw several punches at him. Burter dodged easily.



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nice update bro! keep them comming
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MercenaryTao115 wrote:
nice update bro! keep them comming

Thanks bro!.

Lol at Nam, Giran, and MUMMY bum rushing the Saibamen bwhahaha..
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lol, piccolo has his own crew on king kais, fuck that training!
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I just read this.You have some talent
Will you continue,or are you out of ideas?
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I just read this.You have some talent
Will you continue,or are you out of ideas?

Thanks man. And yeah im planning to continue...just working out my levels...
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Check out my fanfic which is currently under development on Neoseeker.It's called ''Another side of
Goku''.
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Alright...so im gona update this now...

Some changes from the regular series will occur...

-Goku will not use Kaioken X10 or 20...Kaioken X5 will be his max...
-Frieza will be weaker, his first form will be under Ginyu...
-no power level will break a million till friezas final form..
-Super Saiyan will be a 10X boost...

note this is alternative universe...so things will be radically different in terms of power everything..
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Im going to add in more dialouge later...i like to write our my ideas first than add stuff in...

ill write a novel/word verson of this aswell...this is just my layout.

somme stuff that i forgot to menton earlery in the story i added in later as when im writing i get carried away at times and forget to add in stuff.
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Why don't you write the second part in a different post? It'll be more convenient than a huge single
post. Anyway,i can't read it now,next time.
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Why don't you write the second part in a different post? It'll be more convenient than a huge single
post. Anyway,i can't read it now,next time.

I will....

Working out some stuff with the story...SSJ is always gona be a 10X boost...
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I read it.It's great.
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